Jakukyo, I think this is one of the best, detailed feedback I have received in some time. Thanks for catching these errors, it was definitely helpful and you are right in spotting each of them. I have corrected the same. Your article looks really good. Kudos on the translation and even the formatting looks excellent! Thanks for crediting us also in the same. I will share your article’s link also via a few of my social media channels so more people can check it out.